Halo BnW

[+Josh Fx]

I think it's one of my bests so far XD

CnC please?

[Vicious Zen]

Up the contrast and brightness a little to bring out the whites a bit better. Like the effects and such, good flow too. I'd drop the text though, or change it. It's not working here. The font is good, but I dunno about the black in that spot. How does it look white?
Overall good, little bit of tweaking would be great though.

[+Josh Fx]

ye it was originally white. But it is very hard to see. And I didn't know where else to put it, so I just made it small and close to the render.

Thanks for your comment. I'll see to that being fixed

[+Josh Fx]

BUMP

please comments

[cC.DOMINO™]

I don't think its your best right now, your sigs in your signature spot are lookin pretty good.

The borders are ok, I kinda like the cinematic borders but alot of pple hate them with a passion. The wireframe in the bg is workin ok, I would erase some of it on the upper left side of the wireframe that corner seems not neccesary. I like the bnw, but did you make it in color too? jc. The lighting is decent, but in the reflection of his helmet it appears there is a light source coming from in front of him. Maybe adding a light radial gradient map over the top of the head set to soft light or overlay bout 40% or so would help. Good job overall kiu.