Hot Cream ;)

[Slave]

LOLz, did the title get any of you intrigued ?

PERVS!!!!



I made this special for all who say my sigs are always messy Is it less messy ?
Is the line going thru her head too much ? >.<

C&C as always is welcome <3

[sirenzo]

hey slave hot cream um if u know what we thinking then u are a perv too hehe and yes cute name surprised didn't draw more people in to see what u had. i like motion of the effect in one direction gj there id still rub in a few areas a smidgen hun um maybe darken it a bit more in some areas as well but i like the feel of this tag gj slave kiu <3

[Vicious Zen]

I wouldn't put the line through her face, maybe upper body, but not the face. Detracts from your focal too much. I'd realign the text as well to match your flow. You've got good flow on this, besides the text. Effects are decent, but feels like it's lacking in something. Like it could use more around her, but very subtly.

[Gaaf]

Lovely tag, i would also remove that line to her body. and maybe make it a bit thinner. Nice flow also .
good work kiu ;D

[limpouros]

only the text and and the line should change :P

[DR809]

......maybe lmao.

Decent tag however like vicious zen previously stated that line through her face gots to go. Work you on depth now since it seems pretty flat and is missing that omph that tags should have.

[Slave]

I took in a lot of what you guys were saying and I blushed it up a little more ^^

This look better ? I was trying to get more depth and more "going on" around her without making it too messy >.<

Sry I kept the text the way it was but turned it on it's side, :$ I liked the text :P

Before:

After:

[ketg]

hot cream attracted me D:
umm tbh if you made your current sig its not messy
i prefer the befor one XD
but its both are a bit messy imo

[Slave]

lol thanks ketg xD I guess I'm doomed to always be a messy girl :P I made my current sig but I followed a tut I found on this site by a tagger called Hotdogs or something >.<

I have been trying to find tuts and info on how to tone down mess and get more clean lines, I guess it's back to the PS board

[ketg]

will you send me the tut it seems like agood one XD