Keepin busy..

[Monroe]

[limpouros]

i dont like the splatter that cover the whole focal.

erase the splatters from the body and right top corner imo

[Monroe]

The splatter isn't really on the focal, except maybe his arm a bit.

[limpouros]

it looks like that tho :P

[Monroe]

Here you go:

[silent_assasin]

Text position could be improved, and the background destroys the flow

[Monroe]

Thanks for the CnC. Another revision:

[silent_assasin]

looks alot less hectic For some reason i don't like it, but i'm really not sure why

[ketg]

i like the splatters and i thinkt he text is in an alright postion , just remove somew of them from its face , you removes too many on your v2 imo
v3 is nice too (:

[flatty]

O dear, Flatty again with his Long Cnc's, Hide!
When you place a render like this, there's a must of flow. Too be honest, there isn't much of a flow in it.
The bg draws all the attention because it's brighter as the focal, Try to avoid that.
The splatters could be used in a positive way, they were just placed incorrectly

KIU mate