More practice

[Death666]

Soooooo I decided to work on more smudging since I failed so hard the last time xD...But yea all remarks, opinions, and advice/tips are greatly appreciated!

[Death666]

Okk...or nottt

[Derosion]

Too empty.

White stroke on the text looks bad.

Overall, it's too blue.

Smudging needs to be expanded so it fills more of the canvas.

Kiu.

[silent_assasin]

Dislike the fact its all blue and its empty (as said above). Also, it promotes suicide which is against the rules (JOKES!)