First Vertical Tag

[Pulse III]

Cnc please!

[Jay X]

Not bad for a first i found that verts were really hard to do after doing horizontals sigs for so long.
But if you wan't To improve this one you need to work on blending, Lighting is bad.
An orb of soft white doesn't look right,makes it look like floating light :P
Make the lightsource come from outside the canvas and use Lighting effects to improve lighting and depth..

[Pulse III]

Thanks. I'll work on it.

[Slave]

I like whats goging on in the foreground pretty boss ^^ Different to the usual putting render in foreground,.. The red outlining the render should be removed I think anyways.

[SF.Kira]

Not bad for a first i found that verts were really hard to do after doing horizontals sigs for so long.
But if you wan't To improve this one you need to work on blending, Lighting is bad.
An orb of soft white doesn't look right,makes it look like floating light :P
Make the lightsource come from outside the canvas and use Lighting effects to improve lighting and depth..

I got into verts easily somehow. :P
Btw on topic, looks a tad blank, to little effects.

[JoshK]

I like it has a good render
Background needs some work, kind of plain
The lighting also seems kind of just there, not really built into it.
Work on the lighting of the sig, but other than that KIU