a wierd wallpaper

[dragoneye]

heres w0t i made, took about 2 hrs or summat
and the idea was totally mine :blink:

(erhm... NOT )

:P :P :P lol, so i was inspirated by that, if anyone doesnt get it :huh:

[Dick]

omg thats awesome , i love these colors , but that text need some more work but only small changes... i think 9.5/10 :P

[Illegalx17]

Uhh SS, no offense, but read the thread about this section. It is ment for detailed critique. Since you dont have anything to say besides "its good" etc. Read the rules and please dont post in this forum unless you have real critique. Very nice DE. I think maybe you should just have the text be all one color for the most part. I dont like where it changes. Thank you.

[MetalSkin]

very nice mate, i think that the grid in the centre looks out of place and i dont like the brush stokes (that look like a paint brush) on top of the other areas. This is because it looks like you have gone for a coloured marble effect but then have painted over the top with a brush.

Using the cloud renderer and those cracks (which I presume is a bush) is very nice and i love your style of different coloured squares.

Maybe you could make the centre peice a different material type, like chrome or copper or some such, otherwise i would leave it as the marble style. You could even go for a different colour of marble, like white if you wished.

[dragoneye]

didnt do anything about the grid, cuz i kinda like it and im gonna be the one using this so :blink: oh well :huh: and to me even a wallpaper needs a border kinda thingy, it just doesnt feel right when used :blink:



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[Illegalx17]

Dude that is freaking amazing. Except for the piston like things, they don't really fit. Maybe if you didn't try to blend them? Great job dude.

[MetalSkin]

hmm dont know if i like the changes. the piston things do look out of place and the very thick border with the corner draw the eye away from the centre. its like the decoration is too heavy handed.

[undertone]

i like the top one more. colours are good, but did you use a colour ballance over all the layers? if you didnt, you shold, it'll tie the text and bg together.

[dragoneye]

undertone, the point is that where the background is colored, the text is black and white and when the backkground is black and white, the text is colored :huh:
and that border is more like just to fit my windowblinds so :huh: oh well, thx for the comments guys, keep em coming