Just another GoW sig

[KiwiBadGuy]

Everybody's been doing GoW sigs lately, I just wanted to be one of the gang.

V1


V2

[JoshK]

I like V1 better, looks pretty sweet.
Good job

[DR809]

Lol I was thinking Gears Of War.
Anyways the flow is off to the right of his shoulder it seems as you tried to create a flow going off to the North East yet the left of him the thunder is going downwards. Also I'm feeling a monotonic vibe from this piece. Text is ill placed. You might want to try the rule of the thirds or place it closer to the focal.

[Slave]

I like, I can't say too much against it Sometimes always working in one direction gets annoying, why does everything have to move down stream ? >><

KIU looks jawsome <3

[Cap'n Jazz]

The render looks blurred/lq to me. The depth is nice, but it doesn't really have any flow.

[Derosion]

There is no flow or even a sense of it.

Effects look too random, imo.

Seems a bit dull, but that's because of the render color, I guess.

More contrast, flow and stronger effects.

Kiu!

[Bogui]

There is no flow or even a sense of it.

Effects look too random, imo.

Seems a bit dull, but that's because of the render color, I guess.

More contrast, flow and stronger effects.

Kiu!

this and text is out of place put it next to render

[Vicious Zen]

Bogui and Mega nailed it.

To add flow, just have your elements lining up, and playing off of each other, rather than just floating about so randomly.

[Sparda]

Well, as far as critisim is concerned i dont have anything to say that hasnt already been stated.
so emh...dont give in to peer pressure

keep it up

[SF.Kira]

I second everything everyone else said, kiu though.