Flames(CnC Needed)

[Necrothalass]

[Necrothalass]

bump

[Derosion]

Take out the text, it's too distracting and tbh, doesn't look that great.

The overall piece has very little contrast.

The colors don't look too good and I would say it's monotone.

Kiu!

[Xelo]

well it looks like she is in some kinda fog, but the effects on her are not. That makes it look very strange. I don't like the black thingy on her eye (but that's me). Also one of the golden rules is to keep the face clean. Don't put effects on a face, it distracts and makes it ugly. (except when you do make up or a flower or such things..) This has potential, but needs some attention.

[ketg]

i'm not feeling the colours but i do like the effects and you need to change the text

[Doodle]

I'm pretty the black the thing on her face, Xelo, was part of it. Looks like an eye patch circling her forehead as well.. But yeah, I will say take off the effects on her face. Also, the hand is pretty messed up. Not a fan of that, but it's always hard to make a person tag good. Keep workin bud.