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[rong]

Thoughts?







Do they really look like I took some random abstract art and threw some filters in?

Because someone said that.

I followed a tutorial and tweaked them to my own liking.

[Gaaf]

Those are some good starters !
keep up the good word.

[rong]

Thanks for the encouragement.

[DR809]

Thoughts?







Do they really look like I took some random abstract art and threw some filters in?

Because someone said that.

I followed a tutorial and tweaked them to my own liking.

The first one is a bit messy and no flow is really made

The second one seems to be the best out of the three only text kills it.

Third ones okay.

So text seems to be your problem, most people have the problem, and if these are good for a beginner if you are one =X

[TRUeLM]

IMO, the text in all of them is...not so good :P

V.1 = the c4d seems randomly placed...work on it.
V.2 = my favorite of the three, the pixes works here!
V.3 = not really sure what happened here >> everything looks sprayed + over-sharpened. Tone it down maybe?

GJ and kiu!