Lelouch Lamperouge

[ejbonagua]

CnC.

[Derosion]

I like the smooth feeling with the background.
Imo, I don't think the text is unnecessary and was only added for the sake of adding text. I'd remove it or try to making it more creative.

The pentooling color is really off. You have an overall light pink color going on so make the pentool line color more coordinating.
The two lines on the bottom right are random. I don't know if you added it by mistake, but I'd just remove them. They look quite unnecessary.

I'm slightly confused with your light source, as I see some lighting near the head area and of course where his hand is.

Again, this could be a spectacular piece but little mistakes are ruining it.

Good job, keep at it!

[Gaaf]

I like it. but, the pentooling could be placed a lot better, also as said above the color is a bit off. text can be removed for me. dont think it will fit this sig.
bg is awsome good job

[Cap'n Jazz]

The best I've seen from you. Keep working on it.

[Slave]

Great paint brush use , like how you use your pen, again it's pretty great work, I feel you could make it a little smoother up near his collar tho

KIU <3

P.S I see your an anime junkie too <3

[ejbonagua]

Thanks for the tips. Ill try to change it later or so.
Slave, yeah. but nut that much. i just see cool anime pics to use.

[ejbonagua]

and i dont use pen tool. i just made a line and liquified it.

[ejbonagua]

Changed it a little. Change the light source. I dont know if i changed the color of the line that much. Changed the text.