Its been awhile...and i have two different tags here.

[SuFi B A M F513]

[Agato]

If I had to choose between either one of em then I would choose the second one.
The first one text isn't that great, you should try looking at this tutorial for some text help (forgot what tutorial gave that help but just look around and you will find it.
You should try adding effect like stars, bubble c4ds, c4ds, etc. Its kinda bland for my taste but if you keeping working at it then you will get better.

[Xelo]

the heart goes over her left shoulder, but should be behind her. her poor legs look like se's got a terrible disease (poor girl). she's got an earphone on her head.. i would have placed some music notes instead of hearts... colors are a pain to my eyes. sorry suffi, but this beautifull girl needs your attention!!

[SuFi B A M F513]

the heart goes over her left shoulder, but should be behind her. her poor legs look like se's got a terrible disease (poor girl). she's got an earphone on her head.. i would have placed some music notes instead of hearts... colors are a pain to my eyes. sorry suffi, but this beautifull girl needs your attention!!

LOL, yeah your right, i didnt notice the heart went over the shoulder until it was too late. and as for the earphones i like the suggestion i will deffinetly keep that in mind for the next time i use her.. I really like the render so i will be playing with her quite a bit :P and for the second tag, i just thought he looked really cool and i tried my hardest to make a quality tag from that render.