i don't particularly like the colours
the effects on the render are pretty awesome
i'm not feeling the background or composition
and as said before try blending it a bit
Lets just face it, this needs alot of work. The render needs blending, and you can barely the effects on the assassin, because it's dark. The middle of the tag is way too light. And you can barely see the logo, as it is the same colour as the dark bit on the bottom of it. The render isn't great because it has a weird flow, and the effects on the assasin are completely different. Do some more work on it, and it could come out fine.
I understand what you tried doing that putting the background and adding the render but it does need some work.
Take away that C4D behind him because it doesn't fit.
Add effects to it. if it doesn't look right then erase it and try another.
What I do is that if I make a signature and it doesn't look good then I restart and try something else.
Add a light source.
Dw man, you will get the hang of it soon.
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