New here C&C please

[SiteWhite]

Im new here and wanted to post one of my latest sigs to see what you guys think.



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Leave some C&C or just tell me what you think.

[DR809]

1. Decent sig however the lighting is completely off. It wants to be over here to the far left. Very simple imo.

2. i feel as if the render got mushed while you were resizing it. Not really much going on and the text could be placed better. text should never be in a corner usually very close to the render.

You have some potential kiu.

[SiteWhite]

Thanks! Im working on another one right now that ill post probably tomorrow. Ill work on my lighting and stuff for this one.

But while i work on that one ill throw another in here. What about this one?

[TRUeLM]

I'd have to agree with DR on both counts. You can usually tell where the lighting should be by looking at the shadows on the render or stock. I liked the smudging on the first one, but some of the effects look choppy :P

Also, when resizing an image, make sure to hold the shift key (if your using Photoshop). It looks like you smashed the image a bit on the second one, or maybe it was like that? There's also a large empty white spot... Beyond that, the text is probably one of the hardest things to do in a signature (at least it is for me).

KIU buddeh :P

[DR809]

Thanks! Im working on another one right now that ill post probably tomorrow. Ill work on my lighting and stuff for this one.

But while i work on that one ill throw another in here. What about this one?

Okay lighting is better in this one, effects are alright. Your text is just a no imo. You also have alot of empty space. Usually developing a bg could help. But dont just slap on a background and call it a day. You'd have to blend everything into it.

[Necrothalass]

The first one is amazing but the text is stretched vertically if you fixed it,it'd be perfect.

[SiteWhite]

With the text I used the option to widen it i didn't actually stretch it but it needed to be for the dashes to work with it. Or i could have made the dashes smaller but thanks ill see if i can fix it.

[SiteWhite]

Hows this one work?