^ don't lash out at people giving u their CnC when that's what u asked for.
I personally agree with Spartan. The text counters the flow and spoils it for me. Lighting's a bit dodgy can't tell where it's coming from, looks like u've put it in the top right but the render's lighting is bottom right. That might just be me being blind though. You need to work on your focal and depth a bit cos it's all a bit flat atm. Also not a huge fan of the border colour but as the older people from here know i don't really like anything but black/white cinematic borders ^^ Keep it up though nd don't lose faith.
hmm not bad i dont really like the render it doesnt flow well and colours are mashed together, umm why is there a random dagger comming out of like his chest coz i dont think its comming out of his hand :/ anyways GJ and KIU
love the "noise/distort" bring back the blue light so it doesn't look like there is a flat colour over it.
Sharpen your middle render and bring an extra to top and fade it around the sides a little/ an lower its opacity a tadd
Maybe stamp a splatter of render on the left just lightly to pull all together
but i like the colour on the one side and the softer side looks good
these are just suggestions
EDIT: you mihgt wanan go to "filter/other-high pass than leave the setting and hit okay than play with the layer settings until you find something clean an nice
than you can remove your "fake light source or white layer you have that it's making it look dull
Protoss Sig. I love it!
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