Dreamcatcher LP Comp entry - adcar

[Scrib]

well? what do you guys think, i dont think im breaking any rules by posting this, cause i already posted in the entry thread, but if i am, just remove this thread

[Fur]

Your not breaking any rules, as long as you have no posted it before (which you haven't). Your allowed to get comments on how to improve.

Tbh scribble, I have never really liked your style. Its to messy for me and just a little weird. I'm not saying its bad, just not for me. Sorry man.

But anyway. I would give it a BG of some sort, there is way too much white. Also I would fill in the tears on the side with some color. The main thing to me is it really needs a bg.

[Scrib]

^^ thats fine, personal opinion is allowed :L

[Gaaf]

Thats just sick 0.o
realy like it, but i would have used less colors..
gj

[Scrib]

Thanks dude.

[+s9.Oath]

I like it alot man but I hate the colors on it great job man and I am kind of like fur ur style it hard to get into for me also but this is nice

[Scrib]

meh, it's not for everyone, but thanks

[(-)Ion]

personally I'm not much for the scribbly style either. just me, but rarely do I find something in this style I actually really like.

That aside, the detail elements are nice individually. I do feel however though that things really went wrong above the circle. You're coloring seems to get sloppier up there and it's unappealing. The circle, and all the masks are alright, but the girl for sure should be cleaned up. The black splatter on the bottom of the girl/ top of the circle is really throwing it off too. Just doesnt fit with the detailed line work around there (distracts/covers it)

overall nice though

[DR809]

maybe some old paper texture other than that its very nice

[excellence]

...well keeping in mind that all types of art bring complete different compositions, and everyone brings their different perspectives into their compostions, i love adams works

this piece however in my opinion is a bit messy man! it needs a bit of organization above the circle, and maybe a bit more to the circle itself...the colors are nice, the background could use some texture

good concept, however not as greatly executed as you've done before, keep working at it!