water slide

[sirenzo]

[sirenzo]

really dosnt anyone like giving me cnc anymore ? i need help just much as anyone else here please cnc this tag people feels like none ever wants to cnc any of my tags anymore ?

[Gaaf]

Not your best,
not a big fan of the pink..'
i like the things on the right of her.
gj sir <3

[sirenzo]

ok so trashing this style it's a failure then tx for your cnc

[Downfall]

i dont like the pink as stated before, it could use a tad more depth and text needs mega work, i like the concept but i feel you could execute it much better

[Slave]

The pink would be okay if it wasn't so flat, it's never really about trashing a style it's about defining it and getting the best stuff out of it.

Siren chill dude :P Just cause no one c&ced it doesn't mean it's a personal diss on you, maybe ppl were busy or the forum was dead overnight... It happens and you should know that by now mate, your a senior member :P

I'm all up for giving you advice man, but I was busy with my in-laws an tryign to finish my own art :P

KIU tho, this isn't dead, it just needs some tuning up

[sirenzo]

lol 30 people looked at it and didnt leave me any cnc and the other one i had fall out lol had 50 and no one cnced till few days later:P tx for cnc guys god knows i need it :P

[Avatar]

everything right of the text is spot on siren, the left side of the tag is what needs work.

I like this clean style your going for since everyone these days is using smudge like a it was on sale. The text could use work..its too big and takes too much away from the main focal. In general I think its too big..maybe the way you have the text but the placement could be better used smaller and below the leg to make it flow better.

Hope this helps

[Hoshiko]

The concept is really creative, it really does look like she's sliding.^^ The flow is great.
It needs more depth though, and the text seems to be a bit too big.
Don't scrap it though siren, I like it! D:

[sirenzo]

how much more depth can u get on it ? it feels it got allot of depth :P but i was just dicking arround in cs5 trying to come up with a better style and it seem no one really likes this style:P so back to the drawing boards :P