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[sirenzo]

ok all i hope this one turned out better then my last ones ?

[Derosion]

Too messy mate.

There's not many colors emphasized from the render as well. Meaning, there needs to be more cyan and colors that accompany the render. The stroke on the text doesn't go well with the atmosphere of this piece.
Stroke is usually most suitable for cartoon/comic type signatures.

[sirenzo]

well my thougt on this was i made the text like on a magazine for 1 and hes nealing down in woods and its foggy for another donno how u can say it's messy but tx again any ways .

[Skaryface]

i like this one better than the last.

if the bg was toned down more, like more B&W.
it would really bring out the blue in his helmet.
also if the text was all one color like say white, and move it. its too close the the focal and too noticiable.

[sirenzo]

ok ty m8 any more comments ?

[cC.Lee]

lose the text and add saturation looks perfectly fine with me kiu

[Linda]

i agree with LEE
lose the text xD and its awesome :>

[sirenzo]

k ty guys and chika for the cnc any more ?