yamato tag

[sirenzo]

1st v

2nd v

3dV

4thV

[Derosion]

Ripple looks bad and the C4D on the right isn't too appealing.
I think you should work on your effects more, also your colors need to compliment each other better.

Keep it up.

[sirenzo]

and joey i think u need work on your cnc and i feel u have somthing against me to just say all my tags look bad and messy if u cant give good cnc to help then don't say any thing at all.

[Derosion]

and joey i think u need work on your cnc and i feel u have somthing against me to just say all my tags look bad and messy if u cant give good cnc to help then don't say any thing at all.

Lol?

Okay, sorry man.
Let me just kiss your ass and say everything is great in this piece.

Seriously, just accept it and try to benefit from it.
Everything I said is meant to help you fix your flaws that I see in my eyes.

[sirenzo]

okok well u need say it to me it feels rude way u say things at times well i will work on it a bit more still trying to find a newier style for my self if dosn't work im going back to my older one everone seemed to like them better.

[Derosion]

Alright, I'll try to say it nicer.

Re-done cnc;

It's not too bad mate, but there's some flaws for me here.
The C4D on the right, it sticks out too much, try to make it blend more or just remove it.
The ripple effect is nice, but you kinda overdid it here.

Also, it feels like you have two completely different colors here. I think you should stick to one/two prime colors and then variations of it.

Ex:
Sky Blue, Cyan - Purple.
They compliment each other nicely.

Good work otherwise .

^I hope that's better.

[sirenzo]

yes much better ty m8 make more sense that way. will work on a 4th vs and post it up later tx for cnc joey -x

[Benni Black]

niiiceee!!! but yamato is a punk!!! choji is KING!!!

[sirenzo]

lol benni

[sirenzo]

hows this one ? better or worse ?