Gojira Tag C&C Please

[Interrobang]

I really tried to improve my blending and my depth on this one. I realized I can sharpen stuff too! *faceplam* Anyway, please C&C focus on the depth and blending more than anything else. Thanks.

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[Monroe]

Your blending is more of a focal style than a depth style if that makes sense. Meaning, it doesn't really seem to have depth to me, because the right planes aren't blended, you just decided to make the face to the focal and blended everything else. That's not depth, that's focus. I don't like how the splatter looks splatted flat onto the air like there's a clear wall, nor am I feeling the colors. That's my opinion.

[Skaryface]

Your blending is more of a focal style than a depth style if that makes sense. Meaning, it doesn't really seem to have depth to me, because the right planes aren't blended, you just decided to make the face to the focal and blended everything else. That's not depth, that's focus. I don't like how the splatter looks splatted flat onto the air like there's a clear wall, nor am I feeling the colors. That's my opinion.

agree with this. dont blur his body, just makes it look ugly.
also get rid of the random splats.

[Interrobang]

How's this?

[Derosion]

Not bad mate.
The flow is definitely there.
The lighting needs work though. It needs to be focused on one area more.
The colors are personally too dull for me, they need a lot more contrast.

Also, I think you could play around with the text more.
Add subtext, clipping masks, blending effects and other different techniques to make it look better.

Keep working at it !

[Interrobang]

Thanks... Lol I'm so bad at this. I started GFX like 2 years ago... D: