Fallout Signature

[JimNibbles]

I made this one for a friend at his request. He wanted me to use this stock and I like the outcome, but something about it just doesn't feel right to me and I can't put my finger on it. CnC please!

[Skaryface]

its a bit plain. add more effects.
the text needs work, also put closer to the focal.

[draghen]

nice smudger... i like

[JimNibbles]

Updated. CnC?

[Slave]

All the sudden everyone and their mom is using this stock/render wow !!! lol

Anyways I like how your effects arn't bright but dull like the bg it's pretty sick how you got it to work for you like that ^^ I also like how you have your focal almost pixilated or distorted, makes me feel as if he was only "drawn half here half in another world kinda thing.. lol danno what im talkin about.
I also like how you kept his hand focused but the gun is faded, adds good depth.

It does seem a little too dull tho. I would suggest using a stronger gradiant on it or putting a solid colour over it an playing with the opacity an blending options.