Afro Samurai

[MrInsane]

well, just made a new sig,

CnC?

[Mountford]

Awesome dude, text is a tad hard to read i think it would look better without it. KIU

[Slave]

Took me a little while lookin at it to figure out what it was I like the bg and i like the focal but the two together seems too distracting imo.

Your effects are cool and work really well with the feel your going with, but again the bg an forground don't match.

Maybe try adding more colour to your focal or less colour to your bg, or drop the bg all together and just do it a whole dub up the focal an make it work for you as a bg.

KIU tho ^^ getting there !

[Derosion]

I love the effects here and how they're positioned but I don't like the ripple/distort effect you've used.

It doesn't really work, imo because besides from that your signature looks clean and it destroys that type of atmosphere.

I really like how the background stock matches the render though, they both have the cartoon type of appearance.

I think your text looks okay at the moment, but it could be better.
The line on the right, I'm guessing a C4D is a bit random and would look better if you erased it.

Good work overall, I think you should work on your colors a bit more, your text and your effects.
They don't need much work though, this piece has great potential.

Good job ^^!

[MrInsane]

thanks for the comments everyone.
Did some work on it. Did some changes on the lightning and bg.