Kobe 24

**ejbonagua** · 12-04-2010, 05:59 AM

v2

I wanted to use this in JIC's battle with the boston fans. I dont know if he agreed

**mharck14** · 12-04-2010, 07:16 AM

C4D

**Skaryface** · 12-04-2010, 08:32 AM

text needs work.
lighting isnt there.
effects are blah.
personally i dont like looking at a guys rear

**Avatar** · 12-04-2010, 10:42 AM

the light string effect around his arms seems pixelated. also the yellow you got at his feel is too bright and takes away from the focal.

**Derosion** · 12-04-2010, 02:44 PM

The effects are nice, but you overused the effect C4D's.
Also, the text is too sharp and distracting. I would remove it.

Great work otherwise

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Originally Posted by mharck14

C4D

Please tell me the purpose of this post?

**Opt1k4l** · 12-04-2010, 03:05 PM

pentooling is kinda choopy :L but the c4d effects are realy nice

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