PhotoManip: EvenAngelsCry

[NeverDUN]

Well.. here it is.

[Monroe]

Where?

[NeverDUN]

My fault, the link was weird. O.o

[Chris]

I don't have any feedback on the piece itself, but I will this: you did an excellent job on typography.

[NeverDUN]

Well why thank you sir.

[Scrib]

I don't have any feedback on the piece itself, but I will this: you did an excellent job on typography.

-.- sarcasm much? If so was a bit unecessary.

I'm not liking it, typo isn't great, contrary to what was said. I can see where you've used filters and its looking grainy in places.

Not goood. But dont let it discourage you, keep practicing

[kidmed]

I like the widescreen format, but the blur/lighten effect on the subject is a bit strong.

I don't think the text fits and the piece would look better without it, since the background would be visible.

[Hoshiko]

You know you blurred the background to focus on her, but I think being able to see the wasteland in the distance, what she's crying about, would be a lot more dramatic. That's all subjective though, not really critique. :P

Not a fan of the text either, it's the focal of the whole thing, even though that isn't intended. It's really distracting from the piece.

Keep it up though, I'd like to see more work from you :]

[TehTaterSalad]

Hey man, the text seems a bit sharp and the whole blur/lighten thing was way too powerful (that effect is a bit old anyway) maybe try some new tricks with blurring and sharpening masks. The widescreen idea is very cool. Just on the manipulation part of the image I feel you did a very good job, the lighting looks pretty decent.

[NeverDUN]

thanks guys, ill take all the c&c you've supplied and work on it ^_^