looks ok... I think its a little too dark. Your focal is too dark, you should brighten it up a bit, and add a light source. Im sorry but im not feeling the text or the stripes, your depth needs work, which lighting this up should help with that. Your smudged backgrounds looks ok. try reading more tuts and practice dude, overall this tag has potential, it just doesnt seem like its done.
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