Fable Smudge signature

[tigerz_bone_21]

My first time, I am trying to see the smudge signature, so i'm practice of the signature.




CNC please?

[notthefed]

nice job looks pretty good. smudging looks great, but has bit of noise. lighting would be better if you darken around the right/left and top edge area to set contrast.
also text could be better imo. KIU

[Interrobang]

What he said, also I would take out the border. It kinda takes away from the focal.

[DR809]

Your a novice at this I'm guessing.
You notice thr lighting of the render. Its a aparent that he was originally in a dark area and the light from the light source is what illuminunates his torso and face. So you would want the background to be dark where as the smudge contradicts the lighting.
The text tbh doesn't really look apealling try to keep it small and simple or try to blend in the text. The border on the text prevents that.
Otherwise kiu it could use some work