another slave render tag

[sirenzo]

less sharpness please cnc ty
tx again slave i saw was a gift but u did say ones in open can be used right and ones that go to there pms won't be less they let you use it.
anyways here is my out come with this render.


ok ket had another go with this render any better ?

[ketg]

imo
you need to sort out colours , i don#t personally like the colours in this one
and
your smudge seems quite random to me
what is the navy/black thing on the right ?
i've seen better from you
sorry if i came across as too harsh

[sirenzo]

im trying to find a new smudge and getting away from using topaz

[cC.Remember♥Me]

Interesting =P.
Great ^^. But u should add some effect imo ;D.
And text needs work.
But I really like it =)

[sirenzo]

lol tx i had another go at it and text i can care less about :P whaha

[Fork]

Work on your colors and effects. This one looks too wishy washy.

[sirenzo]

the third one ? or the first 2