3 New Siggy's, Rate and CnC please

[van Zeben]

I posted the first one yesterday, however i edited it more and changed some things so i figured i would post again

Stocks:
First Siggy:

Ezio was removed from this and then i rendered out an image which is posted below and used that in Ezio's place


Second Siggy:


Third Siggy:

[Emsee]

1st tag FTW. Nice Flow, Depth and Focal Execution. Just the Toning and lightning will do the tweak on this one

[van Zeben]

1st tag FTW. Nice Flow, Depth and Focal Execution. Just the Toning and lightning will do the tweak on this one

^_^ thanks, its by far one of my best

[+Josh Fx]

The first one is alright. I don't understand why you have all that white on the bottom and top. The effects are also kinda dull. Would be better if the colours of the focal matched with the rest of the tag.

Second one looks pretty much like a blurred stock and a light source. I'd like to see a few effects added to it.

Third one is probs the best. However that text really kills it. Would probably look better if the dots were a different colour to blend in a bit more as well.

[van Zeben]

The first one is alright. I don't understand why you have all that white on the bottom and top. The effects are also kinda dull. Would be better if the colours of the focal matched with the rest of the tag.

It adds a smokey effect and presents the sig as "being in a dreamlike state", there are also some c4d's, smoke brushes, some clipping masks, and some other minor things

Second one looks pretty much like a blurred stock and a light source. I'd like to see a few effects added to it.

Ill post the stocks/renders of all of them so you can have a better comparison

Third one is probs the best. However that text really kills it. Would probably look better if the dots were a different colour to blend in a bit more as well.

Personally i thought this one was the worst, and yes i know text always kills sigs, as for the colouring the purple star field int he bg bring the green/blue out more, if it was all that colour the sig would look plain and spark no interest in it, and it sparks very little at the moment (for me at least)

Ill edit the OP with the stocks/renders i used