Stalker

[+Josh Fx]

z0mg Slayer stop copying everyone's renders when you see them make a good sig with it.
Well too bad I did it again :P
Thanks Ketg for making a tag with this render that made me have to use it.
I know he's not the only to use it but saw his and knew I had to use it.


Think this has to be one of my best to date.
Was aiming for a nice flow and depth here as well as good lighting.

[van Zeben]

meh, it just doesnt do it for me, the depth is there but it could be alot better, there isnt much lighting either, the C4D blocks it. Also just because you put a c4d in and smudge it doesnt give you good flow, its okay but not great

[Bogui]

DOPE I'M GOING TO RIP THAT

[+Josh Fx]

@Van Zeben -well looking at it I see definite flow :\
I agree kinda with your lighting comment though. I put a lot into dodging/burning as well as light effect layers.
Thanks though

[+Josh Fx]

@IRDUMB

lol at someone wanting to rip my tag.
Between you and me I'd target that noob Joey fella. He's alright but isn't good enough to raise suspicions XD

[van Zeben]

@Van Zeben -well looking at it I see definite flow :\
I agree kinda with your lighting comment though. I put a lot into dodging/burning as well as light effect layers.
Thanks though

yea i can see how you see flow but thats the C4D and not you, IMO all i see is a render, smudged c4d, some bokeh, and a bg thats possibly been blurred a little. Also lighting Effects does wonders

[+Josh Fx]

I did do lighting effects.....
And tbh if that's all you see then I won't go on telling you about the other things I did to it.
And c4ds can be used to set flow tbh.
Next time I'd rather you not be so blunt in your cnc and not just pointing out the mistakes. Some advice on how to fix them will help those who you cnc.
I see you're new here so just telling you in the void we give advice not just point out mistakes.

[Ma12auder]

see the hard line on the hood of the render and his upper back? Think it should be blurred/smudged so it blends well. The low is nice until you get to that line....amazing how one little thing can cause that

GJ KIU

[+Josh Fx]

haha didn't see that till you mentioned it!
Now all I see is that dam line ruining it haha.
Thanks for that mate I'll be sure to fix it :P

v2:

better? :P

[van Zeben]

I did do lighting effects.....
And tbh if that's all you see then I won't go on telling you about the other things I did to it.
And c4ds can be used to set flow tbh.
Next time I'd rather you not be so blunt in your cnc and not just pointing out the mistakes. Some advice on how to fix them will help those who you cnc.
I see you're new here so just telling you in the void we give advice not just point out mistakes.

LOL thanks for this and im not suggesting you fix it because i dont think you could without redoing the sig, blur the bg more (more towards the center of the sig or street, and less towards to the outside), remove the c4d and try something else with it. Imo C4D's are used for little things and not ment to be a big part of the focus. C4d's are too ugly on their own and just dont fit with most, also when your done apply to a new layer and do the lighting effects to that layer so that it effects the whole of the sig and not just a certain layer.

Sorry for not posting this earlier but i couldnt be bothered to type this all out :P

thanks for the tips and ill try to be "nicer" towards you