Throw away with battle to Siren

[Slave]

I felt I had no real aim with this one so I decided to toss, hope I didn't toss the wrong one xD

c&c guys, an be rough ^^ I'm kinda rusty an need the tips.

[sirenzo]

dam girl lol thats a pretty hot tag can't wait to see the tag u keep if this is garbage gj kiu

[Slave]

Can you believe that she is a manga ?:O I think I did a pretty good job enhancing the artists "Realisim"

my lighting is off an I really need advice with this one, I wanted soem on her face, so i like that but the light behind her i don't wish to get rid of , but how do i bring it so it is casting through the little space between shoulder an neck? and how should i have the face ? is it light enough where that back light is coming from ?:S

I tried really hard to get the light going, but meh, fail :P

P.S NO TOPAZ FOR THIS PUPPY!!!

[Genisphere]

maybe try a light down from that angle or use some paint and lens effects with blend really hott siggy slave!

[tzp]

You could try an outer glow + brush for neck/shoulder? Also, I love this but I hate the colors if that makes sense. This sig rocks but I would like to see an easier transition of yellows and pinks and white. Get rid of the purple and blue and I think it would be a lot better. Also, make less planets, more nebula? I like the planets but I think there are too many of them. This is manga? WOW. Can you post the render? I would love to give this photo a go and see what I can come up with if you don't mind. You are very good. I've been looking at some of your work and you're one of my faves. Keep it up!! Love it.

[Slave]

ty guys for the tips an compliments

I know what you mean about the nebula, will play with it later an post a v 2

I kinda liked the blue, but yes there is onyl a few spots where it is, i could do with a toss on that.

I rendered only her face cause thats all i needed but here is the stock.

Would have liked to have done a vert on her cause of whats going on in the back, might use her again soon ^^

[schultz]

why did you throw it!! D:

[tzp]

Thank you thank you!!!