patience

[Chemical]

[ROTD]

i dunno u can barly see the render the sig itself is aight doh... but brushing is a little thick and i cant read the small text all that well all i can see is

Patience
Key

[undertone]

cool brushing, cool render, but the brushing layer is too thick. the text is too light, but i can tell it says patience is key. and i can find the chemical, but its hard to find. dont like the colours alot, but hey, it works.

[Chemical]

trademarks "chemical" aren't ment to stand out... what do you mean too thick? there aren't that many layers if that's what you mean... the color is ok i think, i could have done a multi-color using red or sumthing like that... but i cant really make the text stick out more without making it look worse...

[undertone]

it just feels too heavy. i dunno, it looks alright, but the contrasting IS doesnt look that good.

i do like the brushing though, very nice.