Doom - Tay X

[Downfall]

Cnc

[ejbonagua]

Can I have the render?

Looks like not much have been done to it. But i like the text. But im kinda looking for more effects,etc.

[Downfall]

I added effects around the ball, but i didnt want to go all out c4d on this one

Doom Render

[tzp]

Wow. It actually seems really complete to me. I love the text. Is it clipping mask? I don't know what I would change on it. Very good composition and balance. I like the colors. His glowing chest is the only thing I'm not 100% sold on. I love the effect but that does seem a little bit empty now that I look at it again. Might be nice to see a little bit of what's behind it, or add some things so you can see the "inner workings", like his gizzards are glowing, rather than just a whitewash. Other than that I really like that one. Nice crisp clean render and it really feels like it's a part of the background.

Actually, maybe burn the leftmost and dodge some other areas to make it look more "shiny" as if the glowing area is reflecting off of his other parts a little bit more?

It's not a bad thing at all, but it's interesting to see such a "happy" doom tag.

Very nice work. Keep it up! You're one of my fave taggers.

[Downfall]

Wow thanks bro ^.^, i couldnt really show whats behind the ball as the balls on the render :/
but amazing cnc really constructive thank you

and yes the text is clipping mask

[tzp]

Hmm, fair enough. You're welcome. I'm really trying to up my CNC standards.

What about adding some green shiny clipping mask parts over the ball? That way you're not showing what's behind it but you can add some depth to it, with some drop shadow or even a different tone/shade of the green? Just thinking out loud. Kinda like sharp shatter effect over it you know?

[Timentia]

I added effects around the ball, but i didnt want to go all out c4d on this one

Doom Render

o.o? thats not the render?

[ejbonagua]

Now I'm diggin' it. I got the render. I can see what you did. GJ.

[Downfall]

Yeh it is time :s

and ill try it out soon or i might remake this tag in the future and take your ideas and try them out, Thanks alot mate

[Timentia]

Yeh it is time :s

and ill try it out soon or i might remake this tag in the future and take your ideas and try them out, Thanks alot mate

Dr Octopus
Made by me in Cinema 4d, feel free to credit me if you wish.

Enjoy.

o.o?
dr octopus there, not the doom guy render