Given to Fly

[undertone]

been working on it all night. I need to know wether or not to work on the water, and the sun beams, something ive never done before.

Please, comments and suggestions!!!! :blink:

[iceryu]

maybe more lines on the water how the hell do you draw so good <_<

[undertone]

hehe, i dunno really. never taken a real drawing class, and school art classes dont count, because i dont learn in those classes.

yeah, i really should darken the lines on the water, thanks.

any thoughts on the sun beams?

[DragonsRage]

You made that in photoshop?

[Samuel]

Sun beams looks alright, they need some lines in them tho, kinda look fake know what i mean? The water is great just darken up the lines. Good work mate&#33;

[undertone]

yup, all photoshop.

ill be working on that water asap&#33;

and the sunbeams, ill try it out, was going for a kind of vectorish look to them, but i see your point.

[Samuel]

Well i saw you were going for vector but... it dosent match with the whole coloring theme. Know what i mean?

[Illegalx17]

Is this a collab? Because it&#39;s for OC4 right? Anyways, i like the sunbeams just how they are, but i think that maybe you should clean up the lines. Go over them in PS to just make them darker. And do you draw this stuff and scan it in or draw it ON PS with a tablet or something?

[undertone]

not a collab, never done one really.

its a scan in, then i do a bit of cleaning in ps. i used to have a tablet, but it broke some how and i cant fix it.

so i guess i lied when i said all ps, sry -_-

and yeah, ill start making the sun-beams fit in a little.

[robgasm]

you could make them red like the japanese kamikaze flag

lol jk

it looks rele good, when you pm&#39;ed me i couldnt exactly tell what it was but its clearer now that youve done more (either that or i didnt look properly in the pm)