Murder

[robgasm]

ok, this is my oc4, WIP so its not finished yet, i need to add more, but its gona take a while to decide

note. it is kinda gory, and if you dont like that then dont look

http://pix7.com/0605/4067q_oc4v2.jpg

original stock:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12888279/

i hope its ok to post the stock as a dA link, as it needs to be able to show credit

remmeber, its WIP

[iceryu]

diediediedie hahaha thats really nice...although i think there is too much of it at the eyes anyways nice job

[robgasm]

ok, well, its ment to look like rape.. and she has a very bad black eye

i still cant decide wether to put and like proper blood on yet..

[Dick]

still something missing ... as i told u before. .

[robgasm]

yeh, someothing is definately missing but i cant put blood/a cut in there casue its metn to be rape not a stabbing or sumthing..

[Illegalx17]

Dude, it's a nice idea, but it's just about 6 mins work with the burn/dodge tools. Seriously dude, that is all good and well but it doesn't look that real and it's very easy. Still nice i guess, if i were you i'd work on the text.

[robgasm]

it took me 1hr30mins so far so thanks

[Illegalx17]

O_o well ok, on second glance i guess the bruises look very nice. Some parts look nice but not very realistic. Like her hand, is that blood or a bruise??? The lips look kind of fake as well. Why would her lips be bruised but everything else is perfect? :blink: just doesn't look realistic.

[robgasm]

i tried to make blood dripping from her lips, and yes its blood on her hand

i may not actually enter this, tho i haev no other ideas

[undertone]

Originally posted by Illegalx17@Jun 2 2005, 10:11 AM
Dude, it's a nice idea, but it's just about 6 mins work with the burn/dodge tools.* Seriously dude, that is all good and well but it doesn't look that real and it's very easy.* Still nice i guess, if i were you i'd work on the text.

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wow, ive said this before, but i guess ill say it again. does it really matter how easy or how long some one took on a damn image. i couldnt give a shit if you took 4 years on an image, or 30 seconds. if it looks nice, then great. if you want to post a comment or a suggestion on an image, give a fucking suggestion. tell them to do this, that, or how to improve what ever is bad.

alright, dont take that as the wrong way, just it seems latley all youve (actually its not just you) been doing it commenting on difficulty, and how long (it appears i might add) things take.

alright, ranting done, i said before i like it, but yeah, there IS something missing. i guess its because theres nothing subliminal, nothing under the image. they say every image says 1000 words, and it seems like its missing a few. i say make it a bit more unconventional, a little more conceptual. you could do it by adding some grunge to it, make it a bit disturbing.

dont throw it out till you have another idea, and enter it any way, cant hurt can it?