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    Default STAGE DIVING [yaku]

    CNC is appreciated


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    Well it's kind of odd how her leg fades into nothing and the same with the sparkle hands holding her up. I like the depth of the crowd a lot, would be interesting to see the render on this one so see what all you did. Looks very well merged into the BG for the most part which is impressive. I like the swipe thing in the bottom left hand corner as well. Very well done. I lie the colors and I think that the font works really well with this one. So that's really good. Light source does feel a little absent in this tag. Would be nice to see if coming from behind him. I called her a him didn't I? Anyways. The border is cool too. Just feels a little messy would be nice to see it cleaned up and the glowy sparkles reimagined. Placement and strength doesn't feel like a great match to me. Keep up the great work! Thank you for sharing.



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    Quote Originally Posted by tzp View Post
    Well it's kind of odd how her leg fades into nothing and the same with the sparkle hands holding her up. I like the depth of the crowd a lot, would be interesting to see the render on this one so see what all you did. Looks very well merged into the BG for the most part which is impressive. I like the swipe thing in the bottom left hand corner as well. Very well done. I lie the colors and I think that the font works really well with this one. So that's really good. Light source does feel a little absent in this tag. Would be nice to see if coming from behind him. I called her a him didn't I? Anyways. The border is cool too. Just feels a little messy would be nice to see it cleaned up and the glowy sparkles reimagined. Placement and strength doesn't feel like a great match to me. Keep up the great work! Thank you for sharing.
    Yea his legs fade into nothing because there were no people on the left. :P It's like he's in the air jumping from the stage.
    Actually there's a light source coming from behind him,that seems pretty obvious to me,but maybe that's just me.
    Thanks for the cnc bud.
    It was a stock,not a render but here it is:


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    The motion and atmosphere it is in doesn't make much sense, you see hands that are smudged, blurred, effects, then the character looks like an animae character. No flow, and see her pink shorts? Look below it, I see a line streaming down awkwardly and this deep blackish/redish dotted area.

    Overall it's effective and very creative.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Misery View Post
    The motion and atmosphere it is in doesn't make much sense, you see hands that are smudged, blurred, effects, then the character looks like an animae character. No flow, and see her pink shorts? Look below it, I see a line streaming down awkwardly and this deep blackish/redish dotted area.
    sorry dude but this doesn't really make much sense


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    Hm... Wrong stock for the right style is what I would say..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morphine View Post
    Hm... Wrong stock for the right style is what I would say..
    Yeah. I kinda agree, good way to put it!



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    Well I tried to make something original,that's why it may seem weird but I totally like the outcome.


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