Return of the Hawk

[Broken_Hawk]

So, here I am, back at the Void, and I'm ready to get back into the game, as it were. To celebrate and begin my reawakening, here's my first sig attempt in awhile:

1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:
I'm hoping for some good, and brutal, c&c's so please do so!

[andoytoys]

tags too sharpened and washed out because of the blurs. You just want a hint of sharpness in it, when sharpening don't over do it always set it on low opacity so that the quality wont be destroyed

[Broken_Hawk]

alright thanks andoy I've reworked it and posted the 2nd attempt. Is it better?

[Broken_Hawk]

no more c&c?

[Genisphere]

hey wb to the void

decent sig v2 looks better there's still some things i would fix though

i would make this have a better flow you have your background going in two directions and you want it going the same direction as your render. Your liht source isn't bad but i would give it a bit more and do some dodge/burn in various areas to add some more depth also blend and opac your c4d's for extra depth

overall nice job for your return want to see more from you k.i.u.

[Broken_Hawk]

Alright, thanks Gen! I'll keep those in mind.