Tron SS throw away :)

[+s9.Oath]

it sucks i know lol

[Derosion]

Concept is there, smudging is kinda bringing it down. You could've went for a more realistic atmo if you continued with a stock BG, try to use different tones of blue and even different colors for your C4D's. Experiment with a few coloring techniques as well.

Kiu!

[+s9.Oath]

thx man i will try that next time u see why i didnt submit that in the SS lol

[Xelo]

lold at your text!!
i 've tried this render too... it is fookin difficult to make a proper sig with.. you did a much better job then me with it!!

[Slave]

wow good eye xelo I didn't see the text the first,second or 3rd time i looked xD

I also think you did a good job with colour, effects and flow. I don't see all the much wrong with it besides the front wheel, the smudge work there seems lq compared to the rest of the image

[Aether]

thx man i will try that next time u see why i didnt submit that in the SS lol

Don't worry, mine sucks you would've won with this