SS throw away against Domino

[Slave]

p.s before anyone says anything it's not a stock

Really love the work I id to make the octo limbs look liek they are actually there by his lower. a lot of lighting an shadow went into ti >.< but I asked a source if it was manga an was informed it might be CG not manga, and I wouldn't want to loose becuase I didn't use the right render for the theme >.<

[-V.]

Is it a stock? ;o
Joke ^^

Its a very nice tag, good lightning, nice depth and lovely colours. But some spots needs more burn in my eyes. And if I was you I'd delete the border. It dont makes it look better..

GJ slave.

[sirenzo]

if people says looks like a stock then they know u did u job right because that's the purpose to making sigs like that to blend a render in and make light make feel like it supposed to have been there and the surrounding area . great piece slave sry its your toss up can't wait to see your battle tag then :P.

[Slave]

thanks an yeah i didnt like boarder either , but i get ppl who say ..where is border ?

Wanna give me some ideas as to where you think needs more brun ? I'm a bit of a newb with my lighting ^^

[Timentia]

whats the focal here?
idk if its the octopus at the bottom the hand or the guy himself lol

[-V.]

Just burn or usea soft brush in black on the bottom. In my eyes it woud look better. But if you dont, just keep it this way.

[cc.mio]

I think it's too big, smaller canvas it will make it better and miss there clear focal, my eyes are all over it, was enough negative things... love you color work, as always. that tentacles was part of render? if yes I do not like them, If no I like them lol depth is acceptable

[TRUeLM]

This looks very nice slave. You did do a good job making the tentacles seem like they belong here, and your blending was amazing. I honestly thought it was a stock before I read your post.

The border is a tad bit annoying, but that doesn't take anything away from it. Gj, 'tis a shame you had to throw it out on a technicality D:

[Slave]

the octo shit came from the octo stuff on his arm, i just maniped it to look like "around" his lower areas.

Time I felt the focal was the dude :S I hate to use a lot of c4d an stuff so I tend to use the render to do it. I hate throwing a c4d right smack in the foreground to "hide" my render so I make it seem as if there is a lot of foreground already with the focal so it looks "clean"

I see what you mean mio about size, but I'm trying to use all same size for the sake of once the SS is done I intend to put them together as a pack an thought it would look sharp if they all "matched" in some way :P

Thanks siren for the lovely compliment ^^ lol you just gave me confidants ^^

Thanks for the feed back ppl, positive or neg, always good to know