Transformed, C4D Style, Please Rate and CnC

[Mets08123]

I just finished making this sig. I used a C4D style this time. I already made a bumblebee sig in the past, but I wanted to give it another go. I think this one is a lot better. I'm pleased with the outcome. Here it is:


Original Render:


As always Rate and CnC.
Thanks

[Mets08123]

*Added*
original render

[Ebrithil]

not a huge c4d fan myself, could use some depth brah.
The render is really sharp and everything is really blurred, looks funny.
KIU

[Downfall]

thats Slaves render if im not mistaken??

[Derosion]

Seems a bit too messy. Flow and concept is good and the way you tried to use C4D's is interesting.

I'd probably work around with the background some more, try to lower your FX here, it doesn't really seem to fit in with it. Also the color of the FX doesn't go too well with bumblebee either.

Kiu!

[+Josh Fx]

one thing I would change. The c4d and the splatter around the top right area. Ruins the flow.
The text also is unnecessary and isn't too appealing. Get rid of it ^.^
Apart from that I really like this. I think the messy style fits it nicely just clean up the right to keep the flow going.
KIU