some logo and concept work

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Here are some logos I have made over the years and would love to get some feedback on them.

This here is my personal logo that I use when doing any professional work



and these are some sample work I have done

[ejbonagua]

Wow. You pen tooled?

[Derosion]

Quite nice, try some gradient work.
Like for this,
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y24...onxel/logo.jpg

Try gradients instead of just a solid color .

[Pet]

Quite nice, try some gradient work.
Like for this,
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y24...onxel/logo.jpg

Try gradients instead of just a solid color .

Don't add any gradients to the personal ai logo, it is perfect as is.


Those others on the other hand need a lot of work. I am confused how you go from an amazingly simple idea for your personal logo, and then try to make more complicated ones, and slightly sloppy for the other conceptual ones.

The last 2 are more highway sign crests, not logos. The radio station one is messy, very messy, keep the lines clean. For Klassic Tracks, I would have just made something with a vinyl, and not adding a bullet train, which does need work on its lines. And the rap concept, it shows how complicated it is, when it becomes difficult to see with your watermark over it.