Was feeling messy

[jeffro]

so i came up with this. some c&c would be nice

[Helix]

Think it could use some contrast and maybe some blurring to create a focalpoint. The graphics and lighting are all great. Good sig

[jeffro]

another messy sig here.

[OneMind]

Loving the second one. The first one, like Helix said could use a blur and focal point but the second one is awesome...only thing i noticed is it would be alot better without the black details on the left side of the render.

[Ebrithil]

Remove the big splatter blob to the right of her mouth on her hair, spoils the depth.


In the first one, needs more depth, try using the blur tool as well as dodge and burn


Second one is cool btw

[jeffro]

now that you mention it that blob is sort of out there. here's a revised version



and thanks for the comments

[sirenzo]

indeed gj m8 like second one allot and the advice on the top one i would also try out . gl and kiu

[Helix]

dude just edit your original post and post the new versions there so that they're not all spread out over the conversation...