Anime GIRL TAG FOR THE Render challenge

[sirenzo]

made this for the next render challenge what u think of it ?

[Fork]

Text kills it, I also dislike the border. And work on the depth. The effects are nice blending is nice.

[sirenzo]

tx man lol maybe the next render i will do better on it and depth ?
i thought i had my depth prety well ? maybe i erased too much.

[Fork]

Next time try blurring some of the effects in back to make them look like their farther away. And maybe try a different BG instead of the clouds.

[oNo]

Effects are nice. Yes text doesnt look good.
And you really need to work on quality, your recent ones have been looking really LQ
other then that. kiu

[cC.Lee]

it looks LQ agree with Elipse work on text also like what pork posted. and lighting is a bit unnatural . kiu.

[sirenzo]

i think it looks fine with this bg and i did do that i just might have lowered the opacity too much and erase too much of it :P
i don't see how u sying it looks lq ? it looks crisp on my end :P

but tx for the cnc i guess :P