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[DJFX]

My friend challenged me to a GFX competition and he said topic was facebook and had to be 1000x1000

I haven't seen his yet, but you guys can take a look.
(CnC too please)

[SunPower]

Pretty Cool! But i dont like the black smoke :/ Just my opinion

[Scrib]

Shading on the letters is wrong. Also, there's far too muich blue, more white would have helped.

[DJFX]

The shading was done in Cinema 4D along with the text, so I'm pretty sure it's right. :/

[SF.Kira]

At first glance I fell in love but I noticed some small tweaks that could be made.

[Helix]

Shading on the letters is wrong. Also, there's far too muich blue, more white would have helped.

I agree, it's very BLUE, more contrast and this piece will be amazing. The composition is great. Cool effects

The shading was done in Cinema 4D along with the text, so I'm pretty sure it's right. :/

I think he means with the overall lighting of the image. Imo the shading on the letters looks off since some are lit and some are not. Maybe if you moved the light toward the front so that it illuminates the object. One of my friends whos hobby is photography told me that you should always have the sun at your back while you're taking a picture


*---X----[]

*=lightsource
x=you
[] = object

cheers

[DJFX]

Thanks for the tips Helix

[Scrib]

waht helix said about the lighting, sorry, i wasn't clear

[Mountford]

Looks rude!
My Cinema 4d is playing up! cant make nouut!