Disturbed

[Eddieisaussie]

Was just playing around abit, and made this i think it looks alright,
none of my tags recently have font, as it ruins it due to my failness at text, links to good tuts please ? on text

well here it is



BnW


CnC?

[Eddieisaussie]

CnC please?

[tits]

Yo mang watch the double postin. o_0

B and w is better. Work on your flow, lighting, don't center your focal, and a bit lq. Not too bad man, keep it up.

[Eddieisaussie]

thanks

[turok5011]

i would work on blending you render in a little bit more. you can see the eraser dots on the right.. colors are nice! oh and i would work on adding some depth. hope that helped

[Eddieisaussie]

thanks

[Eddieisaussie]

Bump

[MrDeleTe]

Colours are OK, just a little bit more depth, blending & maybe more working on lightings. Overall it's good!

[Eddieisaussie]

thanks

[Applejuice]

it is ok.
I don't know how experienced you are, but I'm just going to get into your sig.
It has barely no depth. You create depth by sharpening the vocal and blurring backgrounds or close objects. Blur more next time I think.

you would probably need more flow to get more people to like it on this forum, place c4ds in the same direction and such to create flow. Right now it feels messy for my feeling.

Add in more effects I guess. It looks like a render and lots of c4d's.

I'm not trying to shit on your art, I'm just trying to help you. You are better than many signature makers. =]