New Sig! CnC please

[Kinetics]

Okay, so i have a hard time with C4D sigs, so i threw this together in an effort to improve my C4d skills. In your cnc please try to focus on the C4d aspect. . .i think thats it! Thanks and i hope you liek!
Oh also thanks to helix for making the C4ds!

[Manga]

Seems monotone, not really good depth. Text seems to mess with an effect. No real lighting. Flow is meh.

[Kinetics]

Well, i was going for the monotone light blue effect because it is aquaman, but thanks for all the other Cnc, im going to try and work on it some more.

[Helix]

Love what you did with the c4d, needs more of a defined light source and colors but composition is good! Great sig man

[Kinetics]

. . .Anybody else?

[GoldenDagger]

A decent try Kinetics I would say.
I understand why Manga refered the tag as monotone.
Actually The tag needs blending.
c4d placement is very important.
the c4d here looks out of the tag which actually affects the depth.
I love the blue coulor of the tag.
try to blend the c4d with the tag.
apply some adjustment layers.
this tag has got huge potential.
kiu m8