Swallowed by light

[jeffro]

Working on some lighting effects and I liked how this tag came out. Still needs text but I'm having trouble finding a place for it to fit. CnC please

[jeffro]

So I'm going to assume it is perfect due to the lack of CnC.

[Manga]

Don't you just hate it when no one gives CnC?

Anyways the lighting is done well except that I think the top right part should be brigher to compliment the lighting of his face as his head is bright but there is not a bright enough light source to show for that. I don't really like the clip masked part across his body. I think the background is too blurred. Besides that is just seems a bit empty.

[GoldenDagger]

Its a decent Try.
Nice one. The Tag can see some more tweaks. Not Every tag needs Text.
kiu m8

[ejbonagua]

Stock ploxx? Or render ploxx.

[AnthonyE]

Lighting is really, really nice, but I'm not sure I agree with the color. Maybe a photofilter will help?

[wrftw]

I dont like the color of lighting. Try to light it with colors. Vibrant colors. For text, if you dont feel like it, just screw it. You dont have to put it.

[Gallagher]

Border makes it feel much more elementary, would recommend not adding one especially a 1pxl, but tis my opinion, you can have yours.

Quite like the lighting and the strong colors, maybe a tad bit sharp in a few areas, not sure if that's just the stock or not, noice job overall. :]

[jeffro]

Thanks all for the comments.

heres the render(I didnt cut it)

[Van.]

nice attempt, it seems to be lacking something though. try adding the text in the top right hand corner.