Alice in Wonderland

[Manga]

This is my first larger type art.



Wasn't too satisfied with the outcome but MEH.

I honestly think my lighting is a disaster and the flow is a joke >_>

[Derosion]

Wrong section.

[Slave]

GoOsh oh hell, seen Alice in wonderland an I had to come an look, ( my fav childhood book ^^)

Bravo for trying something new, thats fantastic I am in love with the gate manip you did in the b/g and I love the flower spray on the left by the clock, you have created mystery and a sense of unknowing in the darkness an thats totally cool an fits the theme.

Might I suggest a few things here ? You followed your render well with the lighting, thats spot on, lets narow it a little. Take your b/g an go to render -photofilter lighting effects. I like spotlight most, but pick w/e speaks to oyu, pull it an turn it the way you want, than press okay, put it on lighten, than dup the layer and I tend to put it on soemthing like overlay or darken, and lower the ops greatly. this will help you get that more mystery feeling and help guid you with your lighting depth.

One more thing, I suggest that you add a layer mask to your render ( new layer than press ctrl + alt + G ) than lightly dust some areas with black ( seems how your wokring in b/w) with black to get a greater sense of depth and shadow with your render. One more thing, you seem to always drop the dupped render but on multi on low ops, when working with anime I find it helps me create that setting of (its really there) feel.

lol Just my opinion ofc not a guild line or rule book on this.

It's funtastic otherwise ^^

[GoldenDagger]

slave said it all
kiu m8