What do you think of this?

[BuBBlez]

I'm still learning how to make signatures. I only started practicing about a week ago.Please tell me what you think of this. What should I work on? Your criticism is highly appreciated

[edwinpabito]

love that band can i have teh render pls

[BuBBlez]

Here's the render (Save image as..) :

[oNo]

just remove the vector lines in the back and its a pretty decent tag

[Nitsuj]

This would be REALLY nice if the render was moved off to the right a bit and the words were on the left I think. Also, the lighting was overdone, try to make it not as noticable. And the stuff on the left doesnt fit. But I really like the FX on the render, and the text is not bad. Keep it up, its promising.

[edwinpabito]

and also decrease the splatter's sharpening

[ChanceB]

I think it's awesome! Add a border and decrease the lighting a little bit, maybe spread it out more. And I think the vector lines look excellent.