Tron Legacy

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Well...I've tried to do something..I think it looks sloppy.Anywayz I didn't add text because this is some kind of exercise for me.Waddaya guys think?

[edwinpabito]

i really cant understand it

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Understand "the" what XD

[edwinpabito]

the whole thing

[cC.DOMINO™]

i really cant understand it

understand "the" what XD

the whole thing

epic cnc^^

the main focal is hard to determine because you have 3 focals goin on with the eye on the left, guy in the middle, and some kinda thing goin on on the right side. focus your attention on the guy in the middle the outside edges should not draw your attention away, but blend in smoothly with the bg. try cleaning up the stuff around the guy too so you can see a little more of him and determine whats goin on in there. lower the lighting a little bit as well needs to balance a little more. kiu tho its not that bad.

[Strid3r 9Y0]

10x for the tips man,will take notice!

[ChanceB]

Nice, a little sloppy. Seems slightly lq too. Good job!

[coLd]

What is the content i don't see it ><

[Cap'n Jazz]

It's hard to tell what I'm looking at. Try not to add too many effects masking the render and try to make it a bit large so we can really see it.

[ChanceB]

I saw it instantly? It's a guy on a light cycle.