Marvel Smudge Grunge Sig

[Bogga]

CnC???

[ThePhantom]

Not too bad, took me a minute to find the focal point, but probably because the boobs were staring me in the face. Two minor things I don't like about it:

The yellow/orange in the top corners don't look right to me, perhaps blur them a bit?

The other thing is the background goes empty fast on the right side if that makes sense.

I think the text fits well, overall good job.

[AbOsTiT]

Yeah i dont like the bg either it looks quite messy, and lq, also
the effects are lq. I should put the text a bit closer to the focal
and try to blend it more like using the red and yellow.
Try using higher quality renders and make youre canvas a bit bigger.
Greetz

[edwinpabito]

its overcontrasted and oversharpened, it also looks LQ and yep your bg is too messy and it lacks effects, also, im not a fan of your text..

[Bogga]

its overcontrasted and oversharpened, it also looks LQ and yep your bg is too messy and it lacks effects, also, im not a fan of your text..

how come its a marvel theme sig and thats a marvel font @_@

[JDragon]

I think what he meant was he's not a fan of the text and not the font itself which I have to agree with the text is bad, the background as well as the render is over burnt in some area's and the mesh in the left and upper right of the signature is distracting. You limited yourself with such a small canvas, try something a little bigger

[Bogga]

okay well the was a tut an im still learning. thanks for the advice ^_^