[300]Leonidas's shattered memories...

[Strid3r 9Y0]

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Rate,comment,criticize...
(come on guys..tell me that I got the text and depth right......)

REMADE VERSION:

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And so...

[JDragon]

Text is still bad, first version is better, if you want to sharpen your image create a new layer, edit > Apply Image then sharpen it and then mess with the blending settings and delete whatever looks too sharp or isn't where you want your main focal to be. Their likes 2 faces right near Leonidas that draw away from the focal, the colors clash with each other, don't be afraid to use gradient maps and photo filters, they can work wonders for the colorization of your signatures.And that white in front of leonidas just looks bad. Work on your lighting as well, since lighting is what really helps create a sense of depth.

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Maybe I don't want people staring at Leonidas..Why have one focal point,why have focal point at all.Concentrating on Leonidas or making him the so called "focal point" was not my intention.I'm more for the "wherever your focal land" kind of type.
White things are c4d sparks,creates the illusion that memories are bumping and crashing and Leonidas's shield,and maybe..Leonidas don't want them...Maybe his focal point right now is overwhelmed with memories...
And about the text....back to the drawing board...

[edwinpabito]

too much thing happening and the text placement is not good

[JDragon]

It's good to have a lot of things to look at but in order to create any type of depth you have to have a focal point, something that draws your eye directly to that point, if you don't have something for your eye to catch onto then it's hard to even create a sense of depth. I'm not trying to be an ass, just trying to help xD it's just my cnc you can take it or leave it.

[Strid3r 9Y0]

I'll go get PS and see what can I redo.

[Strid3r 9Y0]

REMADE VERSIONs uploaded.

[Strid3r 9Y0]

well?